Hi Dai-san! I like your haikus very much. The first haiku you wrote is very seasonal. The second and third haiku are very naturalistic. The second haiku reminds me of some Chinese poems written during the Tang dynasty.
Nice! I like them all. It might be something to do with writing haikus in Japanese, but since they're not really much you can say, they all seem very zen. Great work!
Hi Dai-san! I like your haikus very much. The first haiku you wrote is very seasonal. The second and third haiku are very naturalistic. The second haiku reminds me of some Chinese poems written during the Tang dynasty.
ReplyDeleteこんにちわ。あなたのはいくはとてもきれいです。わたしはすきです。
ReplyDeleteNice! I like them all. It might be something to do with writing haikus in Japanese, but since they're not really much you can say, they all seem very zen. Great work!
ReplyDeleteダイさん、こんにちは。はいくはとてもすごいです。わたしは『くろいはな』がいちばんすきですね。いつにないなシーン(unusual scene)ですから。。。そして、『ふゆのばん』もきれいです！
ReplyDeleteThe second one reminds me of the pastoral poems of Chinese poet Tao Yuanming. Beautiful maintains, drinking wine... Nice Scene.
ReplyDeleteきれい俳句です。山のはいくはしずかです。Very peaceful.
ReplyDeleteきれいなせんりゅう〜 I like the first one especially because that's totally how I will be spending my Christmas :)
ReplyDeleteこのはいくはあたまにきれいなえをかきます。よかったですね。
ReplyDeleteこれから 山のはいく よみました、今やすみたいです。
ReplyDeleteWith the second one being the most peaceful, the third one clearly evokes and creates its setting in the reader's mind, which causes serenity.